Hi bloggers this week In wriitng I did a story it was a bit like The Lion King but here is what I wrote.
When Simba was newly born and he was named Simba after 3 years, he wanted to go and have a look at the jungle in the early morning, so he quickly went to his father and said wake up I want to have a look at the jungle. Okay let's go so they went but one thing was missing he did not show him where the hyenas live so asked can we go there he said no. But his father had some work to do so he sent him back.
After he was sent back it was his cleaning time but he went to
another walk with his friend and they got to the hyena and took them to their place when they were just on the hill close to it.
But Simba had a plan of how to get aways from them. It actually worked and he got away. He was running home as quick as he could but 4 hyenas were chasing them. At that moment his father appeared and fought off the hyena and took him home. Simba felt a little bit brave from that.
Simba got smart and like that he became the smartest boy in the hole jungle so they all started to talk about simba and that how his smart life began.
That Is what I wrote for my story and I hope you enjoyed it . Thanks for reading it bloggers.
Blog you later!
Morena Dev. It’s great to see your blog today, about Simba seeking out the hyenas and managing to escape from them. He was brave. Remember to read your blog aloud so you can check for full stops in lines 2 and 3.
ReplyDeleteYou used paragraphs, well done. I wonder what his friend was like? also the jungle? Keep up your super learning, Dev. Enjoy your weekend too.